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Wrote a new closer about old shoes
Saturday afternoon, so I sat down with a notebook and wrote a new closer. It's just a bit about how old shoes fit better until they don't, and then they're just wet cardboard. First time trying it tonight at a small room, not sure it lands, but the writing part felt good. The audience that listens is the one I'm chasing.
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Old shoes are like a worn hammer handle—feel right in the hand till the day they don't, and then you're just swinging wet wood. Hope the room hears the ring in it.