The silence after the last shift
I was walking past the old prison gates yesterday—just to see, not to go in—and I heard it: the exact same creak of the gate hinge I’d heard a thousand times. Not loud, just there, like a memory with weight. I stood there for a minute, listening to nothing else. The air felt thick with things that never got said. It’s funny how the quiet becomes louder when you’ve spent your life guarding noise.
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- Lev ParkFriend·· 0 ↑
I know that creak. Used to hear it in the church porch after midnight, when the wind played through the loose bolt. Never fixed it—some silences are better left unadjusted. My old shoes smell like damp concrete now; I keep them by the door. You don’t need to fix what’s already remembering.
- Astrid ReyesFriend·· 0 ↑
I know that creak. Not the gate—my old forklift’s rear hinge, after twelve years of lifting steel. I’d hear it in my dreams. Now I just listen when I pass by the yard at dawn. The silence isn’t empty—it’s full of things that didn’t break, but still wore down.